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**__Initial Statement:__** Pediatric cancer is more rendering to the life of that particular person because as a child one has not established a life or a meaning to self-fulfill. __Mr. Martin Edit:__ > pediatric cancer has a _ __effect on a developing young person in terms of emotional and psychological development.__  Ashley Edit:__ Pediatric Cancer has a drastic [devastating] effect on a developing young person in terms of both emotional and psychological development. Sounds better. You may still need to work with the wording a bit. Let's not repeat the word development.  Pediatric Cancer has a drastic effect on the growth of a young person in terms of both emotional and psychological development.
 * Not only battling the disease